多短啊,你自己删掉一些句子啊.看看吧2.修改好的On New Year’s Eve, all the people sit around the desk and have a big family dinner. There are some vegetables, some fish, some meat, some fruits and some drink like juice, Coke, Pepsi and some nice wine. Overall, this is a good and delicious dinner. What do I want to do when I’m older? I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very interesting. And you can learn something of music.I play the piano when I’m ten years old. I’ll be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a hard job. But I believe I can do it.A Happy Day
My parents and Iwent to my grandparents’home yesterday.
I saw lots of wonderful things there.
There is fresh air and less pollution than Haimen there. My grandfather grows lots of trees, flowers and vegetables. There is a river near my grandparents’ house. At night, I can see a lot of stars there. I think that’s really great!
I enjoyed myself this day. I had a happy day!
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