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查看11 | 回复1 | 2010-3-26 02:17:32 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
instead of改为 no more thanforwards 改为 towardsWe are like 改为 As ...,believe 后加INRUSHING 改为 RUSH
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千问 | 2010-3-26 02:17:32 | 显示全部楼层
Time goes by, we are getting older and older everyday. I'm already a senior middle school student instead of a innocent child who knows a little.Now I’m standing on the crossroads of my life(人生可不是human life哦,就是life). I am rushing toward the direction I choosed. Although my life is full of homework, tests, busy study and lack of free time and relaxing, but I love it. We are like farmers who work hard in spring in order to gain sweet fruits in autume. We are also like athletes rushing in game as well, we will get up and go on rushing after we fall down. Youth doesn't trust tears.We are young and we are not afraid of failures and challenges. Believe youself and rush as fast as possible. Rushing to our beautiful and bright future!
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