Why Weather Affect My FeelingsOur feelings are changing all the time. Many things around usaffect our feelings,such as weather，colors,environment,mood and so on.I think the weather can affect me most.Someone may dislike rainy,but I like it.When it rains,the air will be fresher.And then there will be a rainbow hanging in the sky.How beautiful it is!Oh, I like rainy! I also like sunny.The bright sunshine can make me happy,so the darkness in my mind will be gone,and I will study better.However,I don't like windy .Because in a windy day,many things will be affected.For example, once the netline broke down in such a day ,they couldn't be mended owing to a strong wind.Therefore I don't like windy.That is the reason why weather affect my feelings. Would you like to share your feelings about the weather with me?
我是根据我所学的给你改的，可能会有改的不对的地方，你将就点看吧……我觉得初中生写成这样水平的作文已经很不错了，在格式上只要稍微注意一下字母大小写和标点的运用就行了。在语法上，要注意两个分句的时态要保持一致，灵活得运用动词的被动语态。 |
