作文有什么语法问题吗?请各位看看。

[复制链接]
查看11 | 回复1 | 2010-11-29 16:47:02 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
To Whom It May Concern,
There will be a meeting at 9:00 Am next Tuesday in meeting room 306 of our university , which is about environment protection and resource management. About 50 volunteers will be recruited for the meeting to serve the people who will be attended the meeting. All of volunteers must be Postgraduates and CET-6 have to be passed, please contact with [email protected] of volunteer council with you E-Mail if you are strongly interested in the meeting. Thank you.

Postgraduate’s Association
Dear Bob,
I have arrived GuangZhou when I writing this letter, I want to apologize to you , which is about I forgot to return the music CD. I found this CD in my luggage when I came home and open luggage. I know this CD is very important for you and I hope to return it by international EMS, the CD will be sent in next Monday and the address is your hotel address.
Please allow me to say sorry again.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

回复

使用道具 举报

千问 | 2010-11-29 16:47:02 | 显示全部楼层
第一句:meeting room 前面应该有个定冠词 the ,或者不用the,不过meeting room 要大写。其次非限制性定语从句which is about ...啰嗦,改为concerning environment ....第二句:serve the people who ...虽然没有语法毛病,但简洁点,serve those who 更好, 还有who will be attended 有语法毛病,不用被动,who will attend就行。第三句毛病就大了,All volunteers must be postgraduagtes and have passed the CET-6.另起一句,Please contac
回复

使用道具 举报

您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

本版积分规则

主题

0

回帖

4882万

积分

论坛元老

Rank: 8Rank: 8

积分
48824836
热门排行