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In summery, I am a person with high passionate and detailed plan to be an excellent lawyer providing legal services in M&A field to Chinese and American companies.

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千问 | 2010-5-30 00:49:47 | 显示全部楼层
基本上没问题啦passionate最好改成名词性质 passion前面high形容passion
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千问 | 2010-5-30 00:49:47 | 显示全部楼层
In summary, I am a person with high passion, and ambition to become an excellent lawyer. As a lawyer, I plan to provide legal services(??不理解..) in M&A field for Chinese and America
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In summary, I am a person with high passionate and I have a detailed plan to be an excellent lawyer providing legal services in M&A field to Chinese and American companies.
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