高手帮我看看下面这篇英语自我介绍有没有病句啊

显示全部楼层 · 2010-6-1 17:19:23

Hello,everyone!My name is Li Yi Meng.I am 12 years old.I am a happy and lovly girl.I like animal,i like color,i like food.I love nature.I like stady,and i am good at dancing，panting and instrumental music.I have a lovly family:my father,my mother,and i.I love my family!That is me and my family!

千问 · 2010-6-1 17:19:23

我会这样写：Hello,everyone! My name is Li Yi Meng. I am 12 years old. I am a happy andlovely girl. I like cute animal, colorful plant and delicious food. I love nature very much! Every day I study hard. My hobbies are dancing, painting and insturmental music. There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and I. My pa

千问 · 2010-6-1 17:19:23

like to do一贯做的。已成习惯。like doing 一次做的。like喜欢意思，接名词、代词、动名词或者不定式。

千问 · 2010-6-1 17:19:23

你的可爱的拼错了 lovely studying 因为like doing sthgood at playing instrumental musiclove my families 是你的家人用复数而且像like 后面的名词连起来只说一个like就可以了显得简洁

千问 · 2010-6-1 17:19:23

语病基本没有建议同类型的句子合并来写，要不看着有点别扭