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显示全部楼层 · 2010-6-3 17:41:22

Mei Fang has been to an amusement park in Guangzhou.She did not enjoy it because she likes Disneyland better.In Disneyland,there is Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and other famous Disneyland characters.And they walk around Disneyland all the time.It is so interesting to see.Though in the amusement park have rollar coaster,and she could also boating,climbing,flying kites and so on.The amusement park is really not as funny as Disneyland.So,she hope that she can go to Disneyland next time.

千问 · 2010-6-3 17:41:22

Though in the amusement park have rollar coaster,and she could also boating,climbing,flying kites and so on。这句话改成Though there is rollar coaster in the amusement and she could also go boating,climbing and flying kites and so on.后一句中funny 改成fun最后一句中hope 改成hopes

千问 · 2010-6-3 17:41:22

Mei Fang has been to an amusement park in Guangzhou.She did not enjoy it because she likes Disneyland better.In Disneyland,there are Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and other famous Disne

千问 · 2010-6-3 17:41:22

.....想请问楼主这篇作文是什么时态的？？我用过去式重新帮你改一下吧Mei Fang hadbeen to an amusement park in Guangzhou.She did not enjoy it because she liked Disneyland better.In Disneyland,there was Micke