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When fresh and clear air takes the place of the dusty dirty air, and the dark gloomy grey fades and bright blue appears in the whole sky, every different city has its own vivid style. Parkways, garden-communities and garden-units show the city's spirit. And all these are so harmonious and pleasant that people's quality of life promoted accordingly, at the same time, people would also be tender and more polite.
There is no doubt that we prefer to live in the city like this. The reason is that we enjoy our life to the fullest. We aspire for a better life in a better city.The better city means living in the harmonious society with congenial atmosphere and unique cultural flavors; the better life means sitting in a place, listening to the beautiful music and communicating with family members or friends over a cup of pleasing fragrance coffe after a day of hard work. It can also be walking in a quiet park, or appreciating a fantastic view with neon lights lighting up the night of the city.
As we known, cities now are becoming more and more modernize,and the things in our lives are more and more advanced now.But is that the real meaning of better life? I don't think so.The better cities should include better environment,but not only modernize and advanced things. Even the slightest change of the environment is closely related to our quality of life. We depend on it, and acquire whatever we need from it. Without the basic materials, we can't live. We should realize this clearly that we have only one globe, so we have to be responsible for our own habitat, to take care of it rather than destroy it. Living in the cities, we must make greater efforts to make it better. As the benefits from protecting do not simply go to the environment itself, but also go to ourselves and our offsprings. it's our common wishes.
You can do many things to protect our environment. Don't hesitate to act, that's our own business! Better city better life. We are actually protecting ourselves while we are protecting environment. So if we want to have better lives,we have to protect the environment.That can surely make our cities better and more livable. Better environment causes better cities;better cities cause better life
因为是从其他的文章东拼西凑出来的,希望能修改一下。紧扣“better city Better life”的主题。 请尽快给我 拜托~~~

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千问 | 2010-6-7 18:06:53 | 显示全部楼层
蛮好的,希望表达的主题更鲜明。比如在添加生活中的例子,更让我们亲近或者做一下对比,更加展现中国乃至上海的舞台。
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