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this is an exaggerating but though-provoking piece of drawing which is depicted that a football player want to shoot to win a goal while a keeper try to stop him in a football match
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千问 | 2010-12-10 20:50:10 | 显示全部楼层
This is an exaggerating but thought- provoking piece of drawing depicts that a football player wantsto shoot to win a goal while a keeper tries to stop him in a football match1.原句中的 is depicted 应该为 depicts2.原句中的 want 应该为 wants3.原句中的 try 应该为tries另:用which 没有问题以上仅供参考
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千问 | 2010-12-10 20:50:10 | 显示全部楼层
This is an exaggerating but THOUGHT-provoking piece of drawing which DEPICTS a football player ATTEMPTING to shoot to win a goal while a keeper TRIES to stop him in a football matc
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千问 | 2010-12-10 20:50:10 | 显示全部楼层
This is an exaggerating, yet provoking, piece of drawing in which a football player is seen shooting a winning goal while the goalkeeper is seen trying to stop the ball.
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