请帮我看看存在什么问题，语法，单词等对不对。还有内容用词有没有什么不恰当的地方。那句话也请顺便帮我翻译一下吧，谢谢啦
Dear.Sir or Madam:
I am the student whom you will receive. I am honored to become a member of your family. This is my first visit to the United States, I feel a little nervous, but I am excited as well. To come to the United States the object is to exercise my oral English, also want to enjoy the beautiful scenery of America.
I have a happiness family.My parents were run a restaurant and my mother is a excellent cook.My brother is a high school studenthe is very clever. On the weekend we often go outing. When I was a child, my parents too busy to take care of my brother and I. I had to do anything by myself. So, I think I am a independent person.
I have broad interests, such as reading, travelling, listening to music. I also like being alone and studying dietary. And I am fond of growing flowers and grass.When I was young, I dreamed of being a gardener. I like travelling very much,ifwe can go to travel together I wil feel very very happy.I am a gentle girl almost never get angry.So I think I won't give you so much trouble. （加上这句，请帮忙翻译一下“为了能更好的融入这个家庭，我也会尽自己的努力去为家里做点什么”）
Finally, I sincerely thank you for your hospitality and I also hope we can build a friendship,make the familylike a real family.
Heartfelt thanks.
Fanny
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