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Was caused by with the progress which the international trade which is advanced from the change which world economy environment is quick is active the various nations started uses the politic means for the politic realization of industrial protection and financial importing.
The import and export tariff policy which is a link of Chinese trade policy is having the financial income and a domestic industrial protective clothing politic effect of China and is applied in link of trade policy in economic policy.
The foreign trade of 1978 reformative open after that China quickly developed. 1978 import and export sum total is 206 hundred million dollars but to 2009 the import and export sum total is 2,000,000,000,000 2,072.7 hundred million dollars. Among the rest the export 1,000,000,000,000 201.7 hundred million dollar and income was 1,005,600,000,000 dollar.
The fact that is the possibility of making the development of like this foreign trade is because being import and export tariff policy.
Neutralization people cooperation country the tube law to do with Chinese tariff system is organic law of levy management.
The domestic custom law as a matter of tariff setup short-term for a financial income security and a balance of payment improvement and to apply a customs tariff regulation policy with the plan long-term for a domestic industrial protection and an international competitive power improvement was applied.
Respects an exporter consultation heightening of competitiveness the tax which from the tax station is included in the export goods the low of annular class is system from China and symptoms executes three export annular passing degrees.
2001 after that China joins to WTO as ever like this one regulation is not solved was having the feature.
Symptoms introduces three export annular passing degrees but with about the enterprise which has the import and export management right about export sale zero tariff applications to lead, symptoms exempts from taxation year-old, in order to produce that export product buys the buying tax amount of the raw material parts which deducts, public sacrifice to the case which is not the possibility of doing in compliance with the annular class rate of schedule the buying tax amount annular class Haeju is increasing introduces a system with the development which foreign trade of China is quick tariff income together.
The import and export tariff policy of hereafter China reflects a foreign economic circumstance and must change with the policy which equips the system which is more professional with the appropriate characteristic which is timely.

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千问 | 2010-12-13 10:53:23 | 显示全部楼层
第一句整句就有问题,其中还有一些单词时态错误,给读者印象不好,结构没有控制住,让人看了不知道在说什么。让人理解是第一位的,句子的复杂性是第二位的
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千问 | 2010-12-13 10:53:23 | 显示全部楼层
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