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I used to music helped me relax, When I was tired. It also brought me happiness. New my hobbies are doing sports like pinging basketball . Can make me strange swimming is a good way to keep fit , and It can help to keep my heart and langs healthy. what hobbies do you have? Can you tell me?

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千问 | 2010-12-14 19:36:43 | 显示全部楼层
我的爱好我过去用音乐助我放松,当我累了。它也给我带来了快乐。现在我的爱好是做运动像篮球。可以让我强壮的游泳是健身的好方法,它可以帮助保持我的内心和语言肢体健康。你有什么业余爱好?你能告诉我吗?
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千问 | 2010-12-14 19:36:43 | 显示全部楼层
I used to listen to music because it could help me relax when I was tired. It also brought about happiness to me. But now my hobby is doing sports,like playing basketball and swimm
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千问 | 2010-12-14 19:36:43 | 显示全部楼层
When I was tired ,Iused to listen to music to help me relax. It brought happiness tome .Mynewhobbies are doing sports such as palying pingpong and basketball.They can mak
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千问 | 2010-12-14 19:36:43 | 显示全部楼层
MyHobbiesI used to listening music to help myselfto relax When I felttired ,and at the same time it also let me feel happiness. Now my hobby is sport exercise like ping-pon
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千问 | 2010-12-14 19:36:43 | 显示全部楼层
I used to music helped me relax, 改成:I like listening to music, which helps me relax. (后半句也可以改成:,and it helps me relax)When I was tired. It also brought me happiness. 改成: When I a
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