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Winter solstice is a very important solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.
Early during the Spring and Autumn period, 2500 odd years from now, Winter solstice was first determined as the Chinese traditional solar term among the total 24 terms. In Gregorian calendar, it is around Dec 22nd or 23rd.
As far as in the Spring and Autumn Period 2,500 years ago, Chinese people adopted the methods of tugui to measure the shadow of the sun for determining the twenty-four solar terms. Among them, the winter solstice is the first to be fixed, roughly around 22-23 December in the lunar calendar.
Midwinter day is the very day in North hemisphere with the shortest day and longest night year-round. After it, daytime will become increasingly longer and the coldest clime will invade all the places on the Northern part of the globe. We Chinese always call it "JinJiu", which means once Winter solstice comes, we will meet the coldest time ahead.
This celebration can be traced to the Chinese belief in yin and yang, which represent balance and harmony in life. It is believed that the yin qualities of darkness and cold are at their most powerful at this time, but it is also the turning point, giving way to the light and warmth of yang. For this reason, the Dong Zhi Festival is a time for optimism.
Ancient china did pay great attention to this holiday, regarding it as a big event. There was the saying that "Winter solstice holiday is greater than the spring festival". Nowadays, many regions still celebrate it as a big holiday.
The coming of winter is celebrated by families and is traditionally the time when farmers and fishermen gather food in preparation for the coming cold season. It is also a time for family reunions.
Northerners may have dumplings and raviolis that day while southerners may have rice and long noodles. Some places even have the tradition to offer sacrifices to the heaven and earth.
Dong Zhi is celebrated in style. The longest night of the year is a time to put on brand new clothes, visit family with gifts and to laugh and drink deep into the long night.
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改完之后,已经没有一个错了。由于错误颇多,恐无法一一讲解,请你自己仔细对照,人斩思考,找出错误,以便举一反三。可以说,去掉的基本都是错了的。文章结构和内容很好。Winter Solstice is a very important solar term in the Chinese lunar calendar.As early as the Spring and Autumn Period some 2,500 years ago, Winter Solstice was first determined as one of the 24 Chinese traditional solar terms. In the Gregorian ca
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标注有# # 字样的都是我修改的地方,可以参考一下;Winter solstice is a very important# 换成significant# solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar. #during the early#Spring and Autumn period, 2500 oddye
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Winter solstice is a very important solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.Early during the Spring and Autumn period, 2500 odd years from now, Winter solstice was first determined
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