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Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to a American family.They live in a small town.It was ver kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.They offered me with coffee and other drinks.We have a good time ralk together.They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.In fact,they are planning visit China next year.
10处错误,还有那个完型,麻烦了@!

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千问 | 2010-12-24 02:16:28 | 显示全部楼层
Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to a (AN) American family.They live in a small town.It was ver (VERY) kind for (OF) them to meet me at the railway station and drove (DRIVE) me to their home.The Smiths did his (THEIR) best to make me feel at home.They offered me (with,删掉) coffee and other drinks.We have (HAD) a good tim
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千问 | 2010-12-24 02:16:28 | 显示全部楼层
Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to a(改为an) American family.They live in a small town.It was ver(这个应该是打错吧——very) kind for(of) them to meet me at the railway station and dr
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千问 | 2010-12-24 02:16:28 | 显示全部楼层
Today,I visited the Smiths-my first visit to an American family.They live in a small town.It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.The
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