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In such a realistic society, it is quite worth that a man still has kept his or her dream steadily. The economy development has been so rapid in recent years.Regretfully,a variety of people have lost themselves in their busy lives at the same time.It is a common sight that a large number of persons go to see shrinks nowadays.And many researches have proved that the level of humans'happiness have sharply fallen down.
Although the two instances above are not all them that the reality has caused, they can also demonstrate the degree of the seriousness of the phenomenon that people being confused about dreams. The accounts for it do exist many,but the main ones are the following. On one side, people often pay much more time to their jobs rather than mental activities or socializing with others. This directly leads to the lack of funs and happiness in one's life. On the other hand, the medium attaches little importance to this issue. Both of these have made mankind today even forget the fact that the last one they should keep is the dream.

To deal with the problem, goverment should place a high value on people's mentally health.Furthermore, individuals should participate in more coordinated team works.They should remember the famous saying that" Always keep loyal to the dream that you dream when you were young." Only in this way, there will be a sunny and shining day every morning waiting for you.

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千问 | 2010-12-25 05:21:40 | 显示全部楼层
In such a realistic society, it is quite worthy for a man to keep his dreams steadily. The economy was developing very rapidly in recent years. Unfortunately, a great number of people have lost themselves in their busy lives. Nowadays, it is common for a lot of people to go visit psychics.(不知道你讲的shrink是啥意思,是这个意思吗?) Besides, many
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千问 | 2010-12-25 05:21:40 | 显示全部楼层
In such a realistic society, it is quite worth that a man still has kept his or her dream steadily. The economy development has been so rapid in recent years.Regretfully,a variety
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