谁可以帮我更正英文心得

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因为我英文很差 所以心得我是去GOOGLE翻译的
想麻烦高手帮我改一下
People usually do not pay attention to their health.
Smoking and bad habits may affect their life.If you do not pay attention to eating habits maybe cause your body.Eat more vegetables and fruits is great for the health.
People only interested in money and then forget their health.Bad habits will affect the life. I ofen heard people say " Eat more vegetables and fruits is great for the health" but it really hard to do.I'm an example. Health is really important to us slowly comes!

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千问 | 2010-12-30 16:56:34 | 显示全部楼层
lifes,habits of eating,the habits may be harmful to your body,Eating,good,are only,saying,Eating,good,暂发现这么多 但是觉得很多句子很中式英语 比如 我就是一个例子 这句 肯定是错的 但是不好改 建议还是自己写 因为英语就是自己犯错再纠正的过程 一定要自己经历才有效果
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千问 | 2010-12-30 16:56:34 | 显示全部楼层
我改了半天,也没改出个所以然来,我想说,好难啊,不过你可以这样试试翻译其实也就是句意+句型+简单词语,你先理解汉语意思,然后想出一个能用的句型,然后加上几个重要的名词,说的简单,做起来难。楼主加油!
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