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When you have a chance to enjoy artwork, have you ever though about what the effect which is the author want to show
If you have this consciousness, that could comprehend the artwork more deeply.
As shown in the picture, we can see that
After we mainly appreciate the picture ,wecandeducethat The clever author subtly reflect a phenomenon that


Furthermore, the author give our a question to think that
what caused this situation, and if we ignore, have you though what the result we will face?
From the personal point of view, we must ……

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千问 | 2011-1-6 12:01:49 | 显示全部楼层
have you ever though about what the effect which is the author want to show改成have you ever 【thought】 about what the effect 【that】 the author 【wants】 to show.If you have this consciousness, that could comprehend the artwork more deeply改为If you have this consciousness that 【you】could comprehend the artwork more deeply
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