备考英语作文。请帮忙看一下我下面造的几个句子有没有错误...

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1.When it comes to money, (money前是否使用the?) quite a few people beleive that it is the most important things,but other people view as differently.
2.In recent years there is a growing realization of Internet.(Internet前是否使用the?)
3.Now people in significant numbers are coming to realize that having breakfast is very important.(这里不能使用it is important to having breakfast )
4.In the past 8 years there has been a sudden rise in the mobil telephone purchase rate.
5.This is a general debate nowadays about issue of the entironment .

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千问 | 2011-1-11 12:47:32 | 显示全部楼层
1.When it comes to money, quite a few people believe that it is the most important thing, but other people view it differently.2.In the recent years there is a growing realization of the Internet.(internet前面是要加the,可是这个句子好像怪怪的。) 我建议:In the recent years the significance of the Internet is exaggerating.3.Now, significant nu
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千问 | 2011-1-11 12:47:32 | 显示全部楼层
这里泛指,不用加the
other people view differently可用可以不用可以使用5 debate on
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千问 | 2011-1-11 12:47:32 | 显示全部楼层
1. When it comes to money, some people beleive.......the others think.......2. In recent years, Internet has been widely used3. Now so many people has been realied that it is v
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千问 | 2011-1-11 12:47:32 | 显示全部楼层
1.When it comes to money,quite a few people beleive that it is the most important things,but other people view as differently. 加与不加都可以。2.In recent years there is a growing re
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