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People were haveing a party in Mr Smith's home. Suddenly
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the bell ring. Several people shouted, "Come in!" And the front
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door opened and in came a small man. nobody knew him, but
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Mr Smith went to meet him and took him the bar for a drink. The
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man sat there happy for an hour and drank. Then suddenly he
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stopped and look at Mr Smith, "Do you know," he said
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"nobody invited him to this party. I don't know you. I don't
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know your wife, and I don't know any of your guest.
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My wife and I wanted to going outin our car, but one of your
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guest's cars was in the front of our gate, so I came here to find
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him, and my wife is waiting in our car for me to go back."

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People were having a party in Mr. Smith's home.Suddenly, the bell rang.Several people shouted, "come in!" The front door opened and came in a small man.Nobody knew him, but Mr. Smith went to meet him and took him to the bar for a drink.The man sat there happilyand drank for an hour.Then suddenly, he stopped and loo
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1.home--house2.have--having3.去掉in4.him后加to5.happy--happily6.look--looked7.him--me8.对9.going--go10.去掉in the front中的 the
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People were haveing(去掉e) a party in Mr Smith's home. Suddenly
1the bell rAng. Several people shouted, "Come in!" And the front
2door o
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haveing改havingring改rangin came改came in第二个him后加tohappy改happilylook改lookedhim改meguest改guestsgoing改goguest's改guests'
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