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6All the new buildings in cities and towns should be built in the traditional style. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Countless buildings are built in modern society with the significant progress of archetecture. A host of troditional buildings are razed focelly by government. Some people maintain that modern buildings should be constructed in style like those demolished buildings. While new buildings replace old buildings. I oppose this point of view.
7The production and transportation of food has been greatly changed by modern technology. To what extent do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Today, food industry has totally transformed by technological innovations. Mass production and flexible transportation depend on those new technology. I hold the opinion that it has both advantages and disadvantages in these process.
8The government should stop putting money in self-defense and use the money to improve public facilities and help the poor people instead. Do you agree or disagree?
Crimes are take up frequently recently. Criminals search holes of public facilities in order to commit crimes for profits. Some people think government should not spending on self-defence but foucs on facilities which are not improved and people who live in poverty. I agree with the point of view.

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6All the new buildings in cities and towns should be built in the traditional style. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Countless buildings are built in modern society with the/a significant progress of architecture. A host of traditional buildings are razed focally/with force ?? by government. Some people maintain th
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千问 | 2010-7-7 21:07:32 | 显示全部楼层
a lot od mispelling,please correct it,otherwise you lose marks for it
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