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Recently ,our school made a curvey about whether the ①garbage should ②divede into different parts in ③classroom.④A half of student agree to it. They said it could recycle the ⑤source and ⑥make us have a good habit.But ⑦there are 37percent ⑧didn't agree to it.They feel it will bring them ⑨into bother ,and they can (10)hardly change their habit. And the (11)last part ofstudents shows (12)nothing about it。
As far as i am concered,(13)put the garbage into different part is a nici idea to protect our environment.

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Recently ,our school made a curvey(survey) about whether the ①garbage should (be) ②diveded into different parts in ③(the)classroom.④A half of (the) student(s) agree to it. They said it could recycle the ⑤(resource) and ⑥make us have a good habit.But ⑦37percent (of the students) ⑧didn't agree to it.They feel it will bring them ⑨w
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Recently ,our school made a survey about whether the ①garbage should ②be divided into different parts in ③classroom.④ half of the students agree with the suggestion. They say it ca
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