求助！有哪位英语高手来帮我修改一下英语论文啊！悬赏急求

显示全部楼层 · 2011-3-7 17:51:26

小女子才疏学浅，不知道为什么老师选中我写英语的毕业论文，结果我只能网上找一篇中文的翻译成英文，写的乱七八糟，老师说我的论文在语言层面问题比较严重，要我自己通篇改一遍，可我只有这点能力，又要实习，实在是没法子了，急求高手救我于水生之中。
PS:我刚注册，没多少分，只有这一点，请见谅，谢谢！请留下邮箱，我会及时把论文发过去

千问 · 2011-3-7 17:51:26

1. IntroductionThe tourism industry has become a crucial component of national economic development worldwide. Tourism brings in foreign exchange and 代写留学生论文realization of oneness of humanity has made global travel an ‘everyday’ affair. Governments have sought a way to entice tourists from every country far and wide. Even co