跪求解!! 英语改错题。。

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I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year,so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play.They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game,and I am getting the better all the time.We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills.Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city,and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes.
这篇文章一共有10个错误,请哪位知道怎么做的请告诉我哪个应该改成什么,谢谢。请速回,急求!!

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千问 | 2010-8-7 21:59:34 | 显示全部楼层
1.第一行中: have been planning 改为plan,因为表示将来的意思,不用完成时2.第二行中:as more time as 改为 as much time as,as...as当中有形容词原形3.第二行中:who likes to play 改为who like to play,who引导的这个定语从句的先行词是people,是复数,因此从句谓语不需用第三人称单数形式4.第三行最后:getting the better 改成getting better,形容词比较级前不加定冠词the5.第四行中:that play against 改成 that plays against,因为先行词是a team,是第三人称单数,
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千问 | 2010-8-7 21:59:34 | 显示全部楼层
I have been planning (planned) to join in our college basketball team next year,so now I am spending(spend) as more (much) time as I can with other people who likes (like) to pla
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千问 | 2010-8-7 21:59:34 | 显示全部楼层
个人意见 ; 第一 全是进行时态,视乎不妥,
第二 as more time 改为much time
第三 other people 是复述 likes改为like
第四 are teaching 改为 一般现在时就OK了
第五 getting bette
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