有没高手帮我改下这段英语

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这段英语有10个地方错的!麻烦帮改下,谢谢
Now I don't watch televisions,but a few years ago I watch it every night.In those days I was not a big tired after a day's work,so watch TV became my favorite pastime.Unfortunate,there were too many people among my family.Some wanted to see one programme while others preferred other.I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing with one after another and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.

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千问 | 2010-8-9 12:57:19 | 显示全部楼层
一些时态有小错误,修改和完善后如下:Now I don't watch television, but a few years ago I watched it every night.
(watch tv 不用加s)In those days I was not a bit tired after a day's work,so watching TV became my favorite pastime.(not a little=very not a bit=not at all如果楼主想表达我回家后很累,所以要看电视,应该用little 如果想表达我回家后一点也不累,所以要看电视,应该用bit
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千问 | 2010-8-9 12:57:19 | 显示全部楼层
Now I don't watch television,but a few years ago I watched it every night.In those days I was not verytired after a day's work,so watchingTV became my favorite pastime.Unfortun
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千问 | 2010-8-9 12:57:19 | 显示全部楼层
1. televisions——television;2. I watch it——I watched it;3. big——bit;4. so watch TV——so watching TV;5. Unfortunate——Unfortunately;6. among——in;7. preferred other——another;8. a lot ti
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千问 | 2010-8-9 12:57:19 | 显示全部楼层
要我改,改的地方就太多了,看看高手怎么改的。
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