可以帮我点评一下这编日记吗

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查看11 | 回复1 | 2011-3-11 01:18:36 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Today is the second day that I start writing diary. I did not feel quite happy yesterday. Well, I do not want to think about it again so that I decide not to write it here.
This morning, I watched the CNN news and one of them said that a demonstration is happening.(虽然是said是过去式 但现在 还在发生 应该这样写吗? ) However, I did not quite understand the main idea of it, so I needed to go to CNN`s website to check the details.

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千问 | 2011-3-11 01:18:36 | 显示全部楼层
Then why didn't you post this diary after you get the main idea anyway? Somewhat, this diary was kinda lacking the active events... And the description wasn't really attractive. 我个人认为,你若了解了CNN的主要内容,你也可以share。大家也可以都多知道一些事情。这篇有店像:流水账~Sorry, I've tried not to be too mean. But that's about it.
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