This year's summer holiday alreadypassed.My family visited Beijing,the capital of China.There were many interesting places.For example,the Great Wall was one of the most famous in the world. And we visited other famous places,like the Palace Museum, the summer Palace and so on.I liked my summer holidays were out.Ithought these were very harry. I like my summer holiday.
This year's summer holidays have passed already.这句忙你改成完成时态，并把alreay放到句尾, holiday改成复数。也可以说成：this year's summer holidays have already past.During that two months' holidays, My family visited Beijing,the capital of China.这句话，为了和上面那句话比较顺接，多了前面多一个时间状语。There were many interesting places.这句没有改。For example,the Great Wall
有啊...There were many interesting places.For example,the Great Wall was one of the most famous in the world.这句的谓语动词最好用一般现在时，毕竟它们现在还是存在的。把were和was改为are和is.And we visited other fa
