我帮你修改了一下你的内容，尤其最后一句。Hello!My name is Yaoyao. I'm a girl,22 years old now. My height is 1.75 meters.
I am interest in the music and body building exercises . I was born in Nanping Fu Jian province. For now,my target is improve my English skill, and i am sure i can make it!（现在，我的目标是提高自己的英语技能，我相信我一定能成功！）
My name is Yaoyao, female,22 years old,born in Nanping,Fujian Province and 175 cm tall.My hobbies are fitness and music.My present object is to try my best to master English an
