加帮忙答一到英语的改错题,谢谢了,最多改十个~~~~谢谢了

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when our six children were young,Suppertime is always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children .ring the bell ,They wanted one child or another to come out and played ,Finally we had a good idea ,We huny a sign on the font door that reed :"We are having dinner ,Come later,''That night we sat down to what they bought ,it would be a pleasant uninterrupted meal ,And us soon as we began dinner ,the doorbell rang ,At the front door .Stood on einght -years-old boy.He looked up to us ,Saying''I just want to know how the sign says.'
谢谢了,谢谢了~~~

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千问 | 2011-3-29 14:05:17 | 显示全部楼层
when our six children were young,Suppertime is(is改为was) always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children (who)ring (rang)the bell ,They wanted (one child or another)(改为one or more children) to come out and played (with them)Finally we had a good idea ,We huny (pasted)a sign on the font door that(which) reed(read) :"We are havin
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千问 | 2011-3-29 14:05:17 | 显示全部楼层
when our six children were young,Suppertime was always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children .rang the bell ,They wanted one child or another to come out and played ,Finally w
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千问 | 2011-3-29 14:05:17 | 显示全部楼层
我给你认认真真改了:When our six children were young,suppertime is always inrerrupted by neighborhood children .Ringing the bell ,they wanted one child or another to come out and play .Fin
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