欢迎大家指正(英语问题)

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Wednesday, September 29, 2010
cloudy
Today I got up at 7:00. I am glad to my performance. I had read English on American home about an hour. I went to study myself after reading. But I didn’t learn anything.
Afternoon, I skipped class and watched videos in dormitory. But I felt very well. I had learned a lot of knowledge.
At night, I went to play basketball with three classmates. We had a good time.
From now on, I decide to change my plan. I keep a dairy every two or three days. I am not give up, I will stick on. I decrease the number of dairy, but I will improve the level of dairy.

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千问 | 2010-9-30 12:54:48 | 显示全部楼层
am换成was,afternoon换成in the afternoon,felt 后加it,learned换成study,am换成will。
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