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短文改错before hewas teacher. robin told me what he would like to be a doctor when he was at school.he had worked very hard at his lessons and tried enter into famous university .
made it necessary for him to working for aliving.

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千问 | 2011-4-5 13:10:14 | 显示全部楼层
将what改为that,或者将句子改为Robin told me what he would like to bewas a doctor;enter into 要删掉into 因为enter为及物动词tried enter a famous university working 改为 work
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hewas teacherwas 后加a robin told me what he would like to be a doctor when he was at school. what——that tried enter into famous universitytried 后加toenter后into去掉
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before he was( a) teacher. robin told me (that) he would like to be a doctor when he was at school.he ( had去掉) worked very hard at his lessons and tried(to) enter into(a)famous
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Before he was a teacher,Robin told me that he would like to be a doctor when he was at school.heworked very hard at his lessons and tried to entera famous university .希望对你有所帮助,
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before he was a teacher. robin told me that he would like to be a doctor when he was at school.heworked very hard at his lessons and tried to enter into a famous university .
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