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I'm sorry to that your friends said something that bothered you when you win a contest. Itcandifficult to know what to do when your friends do something like that.Perhaps you could talk with your friends about this.Finding a time when you can speak at them.Calmly explain what their comments made you feel.They may not realize that their comments bothered them.You could talk with your parents about this as well as if it continues to bother you.Your parents love you very much but want to hear what's on your minds. They're like to have some good ideas to share with you.

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千问 | 2011-4-9 17:39:45 | 显示全部楼层
1、I'm sorry to that 加hear 。2、win 变成won 3、can后加be,Itcandifficult to 4、speak to them(sb)5、语境分析They may not realize that their comments bothered them.them变成you。6、continues to bother 继续同一件事情用continue botherING 7、be like to 变成be likely to 意为可能的意思8、what their comments变成how------,因为句子不残缺9、made you feel其中you变成your1
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千问 | 2011-4-9 17:39:45 | 显示全部楼层
I'm sorry to that your friends said something which bothered you when you win a contest. Itisdifficult to know what to do when your friends do something like that.Perhaps you c
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千问 | 2011-4-9 17:39:45 | 显示全部楼层
When Joe left university,he got a good work in a car factory.But after he had been worked there for some years,he decided to have change,so he put a notice in several newspapers,sa
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千问 | 2011-4-9 17:39:45 | 显示全部楼层
I'm sorrythat your friends said somethingbothered you when you won a contest. Itcan bedifficult to know what to do when your friends do something like that.Perhaps you coul
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