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What does article tell you?
I think it mainly tell me about African how to use the Shanghai Expo to express their country .They told us the important role which Africa plays in environmental protection and coordination of world affairs, development of African countries, urban transformation, economic rise and cultural prosperity in Africa, the past and the future of Africa, impressed and inspired through display of all kinds of service programs, including transportation, buildings and facilities, schools, etc.
Who is the article for?
I think the article for those who want to know the general situation of African exhibition, including what they want to express and what they want to impact the audience. These people may be the tourist who interested; the researchers who want know more about Africa, the Government researchers who want to know more about the development of Africa, the designer who want to learn more about the style of African, etc.
How well does the writer understand his /her audience?
I think it belongs to an introducing essay. The length of an article is not long, but it put the main point what information are the audiences need .It used fewer words to let audiences know how is the Africa pavilion through the main design and interesting sight . In addition to this, writer also used the brief introduction the idea what Africa wants to express. As an introducing essay, it can let audience understand what you want to introduce quickly through a brief and distinct statements. I think it is successful.

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千问 | 2010-10-27 19:03:52 | 显示全部楼层
What does THE article tell you?I think it mainly TELLS me about how THE AFRICANS use the Shanghai Expo to express their country .They told us the important role which Africa PLAYEDin THE environmental protection and IN THE coordination of world affairs, THE development of African countries, urban transformation, economic ris
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千问 | 2010-10-27 19:03:52 | 显示全部楼层
What does the article talk about?I think it mainly tell me about how to use the Shanghai Expo to express Africa .They told us the important role which Africa played in environmen
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千问 | 2010-10-27 19:03:52 | 显示全部楼层
?对不起,米听懂。,,翻译给你吧(需要理解性的看)
、、给点分吧、求你了具体文章如下文章告诉你什么?我认为这主要是告诉我关于非洲如何利用上海世博会,表达他们的国家。他们告诉我们,非洲的重要作用在环境保护和世界事务中的协调,非洲国家,城市转型,经济崛起和文化的繁荣发展起着在非洲,过去和非洲,留下深刻印象,并通过各种方
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