我写的四级作文不知道能得几分 可以帮忙修改一下 谢谢了

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1,有很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是----
2,也有人持不同意见
3 我的看法和打算

Nowsdays ,more and more people access a text of spoken english ,they say spoken english will become a most important part in our life .We can communicate with other people ,wherever they come if all of us can speak english ,Besides , it will easier to learn other country's culture and costome.

Somepeople ,however, differ in drarydays english be use very litter,so it can be learned who work use it .In additions,when we have a spoken english text ,it will make more work for students so it is unrewarding for chinese to have a textof spoken english .

In my opinion,with development of china go aboard or somepeople come to our country has become a popular trend in past year .so if we want to become more richer and stonger .I suggest that we shouldlearn english well and have a text of spoken english is important for all of us .

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千问 | 2011-4-9 00:00:44 | 显示全部楼层
作为一名初三学生。。。我就发表下看法1.nowsdays,drarydays,somepeople,表示看不懂。2.it will easier to learn other country's culture and costome.will后面少了个be吧?costome拼错了应该是costume吧3.differ in drarydays english be use very litter表示句话读不通,不知道是不是有些语法还没学到。4.so it can be learned who work use it. work和use两个都是动词,应该是不能连用吧,中间要加个and什么的5.with development o
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千问 | 2011-4-9 00:00:44 | 显示全部楼层
这篇作文,满分15分的话,得分在5分左右。基本上,每一句都要改。加油吧。口语——oralEnglish.
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