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To Whom It May Concern:
I deem it a pleasure to recommend Miss Wei, one of the outstanding students in our department, for her further study in your esteemed university.
Miss Wei is very intelligent, honest, creative, adaptive student. She has the spirit of inquiry .As long as there is a question she doesn’t know, she will stop asking when she knew it . In a word, she has a strong desire for knowledge and spirit for researching. In my Business negotiating skills class, she was very actively and make cooperation from other students. At the final exam,I organized a simulated business negotiation. Miss Wei took an entirely original angle and cooperated with her teammates won the negotiation finally. It’s leave me a deep impression. I think she has the potential in business.
To my knowledge, Miss Wei is not only strong in academics, but also in sports and social activities. During the period of school,Miss Wei participated in student union and badminton association. She took part with the proprieter to
organize a badminton association that had achieved a large success. When she is in student union, she has aquired the “excellence secretary” in our student union.
Based on these qualities, I believe Miss Wei will achieve greater academic in her future study in your esteemed university. Contacting me if you need more information about her, I appreciate if you give her a chance.
Kind Regards,

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千问 | 2011-4-14 15:26:51 | 显示全部楼层
To Whom It May Concern:It is my pleasure to recommend Miss Wei, one of the outstanding students in our department, for her further study in your esteemed university.Miss Wei is a very honest, creative, adaptive and intelligent student. She has the spirit of inquiry .As long as there is a question she doesn’t know, she wo
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千问 | 2011-4-14 15:26:51 | 显示全部楼层
To Whom It May Concern,It's mypleasure to write this recommendation letter for Miss Wei ____(请用全名), a brilliant student of mine, who has applied to your University for admiss
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