英语改错 求大神指点

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A young woman got off a ship and sat down beside a young man. He wanted to play a game to kill time after a ship set off. He said,"let's ask about each other one question. If you don't know the answer, then you gave me five dollars." So I don't know the answer, you’ll get ten dollars." he added .The woman agreed。 After failed to answer the man‘s question ,she asked,"What goes up a mountain with three legs ang come back with four?" The young man didn't know the answers . so he gave the woman ten dollars. "How is this answer?" he asked .The woman took out her purse ,found five dollars ang gave the money the young man.

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千问 | 2011-4-21 20:24:14 | 显示全部楼层
第二行 1.after应改为before (男子在船出发前玩游戏消磨时间)
2.ask 后的about删去. ask sb sth.第三行 1.gave 应该为 give (上下文可知此句应为现在时)
2.so 应该为 otherwise.这里不是因果关系,只是转折.第五行 1.ang 应该为and(打字错吧?) 还有 come 应该为comes (理由与第3行的1.一样)
2. answers 应为answer 一个问题一个答案...第六行 1.how is the answer应改为 what is the answer (答案是什么. what表什么,how
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千问 | 2011-4-21 20:24:14 | 显示全部楼层
got off-get on
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