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hello everyone.
I’m very glad to introduce myself to you here.
I am Wang Qiang from Xi'an of China.
I had been here three times for the D-Fas System Last year.But all is short-term.This time I will stay here for 3 years to maintenance D-Fas System and to do the relevant jobs of G-Fas.
I feel happy that I have the opportunity to work with all of you ,and to provide service and support for you with Mr. Tong.
As you know,D-Fas is a big and complex computer system.At present,I am not very familiar with it,so during the First period I will study D-Fas and assist Mr. Tong in maintenancing D-Fas.My first aim is to do this job independently in one year.
Besides,Everything here is strange and challenging for me. but I am full of passion. I wish to adapt myself to the new circumstances and the new position as soon as possible,so that I can independently work for you as soon as possible.
Of course, I need to learn from all of you, and with your help I believe that I will become mature quickly. In Fact, everyone here will become my teacher,and I am looking forward to your advice.
Before comming here,I have had great hope to this beautiful place.I sincerely hope that I can get along with you harmoniously。And I will try my best to provide the best service to you.I believe This 3-years will be my most memorable experience in my life.
Well ,in my spare time ,I like writing Chinese calligraphy and Chinese painting.So if you like, I am very glad to give you one.
Finally,I hope I can make good friends with you in future.
Ok, that is all,thank you for your attention.

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千问 | 2008-6-8 16:11:01 | 显示全部楼层
Good. I am pleased to introduce themselves here. I come from China's Xi'an. I would like to have three days to the D - Fas system last year year.but all short-term term.this time, I will stay here three years in the maintenance of the D - Fas system and do the work, grams - in the Fas. I think glad that I have the op
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千问 | 2008-6-8 16:11:01 | 显示全部楼层
hello everyone. I’m very glad to introduce myself here. My name is WangQiang I am from Xi'an , China. Time flies, Last year I came here for the D-Fas System .But all was
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千问 | 2008-6-8 16:11:01 | 显示全部楼层
给你老师不就解决了
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