望各位帮帮忙,修改一下,使其语句通顺,没有语病,删减字数变成约80字.Junior Jim Bill from the relics of the old pirates find a map hidden treasures, that Hai Daotou of Flint in a desert island buried a large treasure. Squires Telilaoni bought a yacht, brought Jim and doctors, Fuxi, who together with the sea treasure hunt. In the Sea of passers-by, Jim accidental that 26 crew members, is a total of 19 pirates, but most of his Flint, they are plotting rebellion and attempting to snatch wealth. Unexpectedly, Apple was hiding in Tongli Jim heard, to tell the doctor and others. Thus, the ship secretly formed a representative of "evil" and one faction of the Flint and table "good" one group of doctors.Fuxi doctors, resourceful, Jim witty, courageous, After contest, the doctor finally defeated the number one faction of the absolute superiority on the Flint and his gang, which contained to the Po.
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