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today is my birthday of nineteen years old.no happy in it ,all the day full of boring
waiting and missing.I am waiting for a phone call from you,you have said that you will call me every birthday of mine,But why you have not?do you know haw much I miss you?I really want to know haw have you been now,without the message about you I do not know haw long I will been live.I hope you can phone me as soon as possble.I think I will love you forever.

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千问 | 2008-7-20 16:32:23 | 显示全部楼层
Today is my birthday, I am 19 years old now.But there is no happiness in this day, which is full of boring waiting and endless missing.I am waiting for your phone call, you have promised that you would me every my birthday.But why not this time? I am really missing you, do you know it? I want to know what are you doing at this m
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千问 | 2008-7-20 16:32:23 | 显示全部楼层
Today is my birthday of nineteen years old. No happiness in it, all the day full of boring waiting and miss. I am waiting for a call from you, you said that you will call me every
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千问 | 2008-7-20 16:32:23 | 显示全部楼层
"But why you have not?"-But, why have not you?"I do not know haw long I will been live"的 live应该是alive另外,文章中的how都打成了haw
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千问 | 2008-7-20 16:32:23 | 显示全部楼层
第一句应为today is my nineteenth birthday.message应用复数
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