帮忙看下我语法是否正确

显示全部楼层 · 2011-5-21 23:54:34

i fly away, will you hate me ? will you forgive me? although i don't think it's time to say goodbye, how i can do that
if i fly away, will you hate me ? will you forgive me? although i don't think it's time to say goodbye, how i can do that

千问 · 2011-5-21 23:54:34

第一句就有问题吧，首先用的will，前面应该是假设吧，有if比较好。其次，这一句：although i don't think it's time to say goodbye, how i can do that。time有特指，应该有冠词，加上the。最后语序是 how can I do that。