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Myschoollife
Ilike my school life because i can do many things at school .I usually have eight lessons from Monday to Friday. In the class,I listen to the teacher and raise my hand to answer the questions.After class,I play with my friends or do my work .I usually have lunch at twelve o'clock and then can havea rest. I think my school life is busy but happy!
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I really enjoy my school life because i can do many things I like in school. I usually have eight lessons everyday from Monday to Friday. In classes, I listen to my teachers and raise my hand to answer the questions. After classes, I'd like to play with my friends and then I do my homework. Usually, I have my lunch at twelve o'c
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