英语问题

显示全部楼层 · 2008-8-13 10:59:13

题目：mary是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁，她向别人介绍自己的家庭
她有双胞胎姐姐，爸爸医生，妈妈老师，她非常爱他们，他们也爱她
My name is Mary.I am form England. I am a girl. I am twelve years old , I am in the fifth grade. My elder sister and I are twins. My father is a doctor . My mother is a tercher . I love my family very much and They love me very much, too.We have a happy family.
如果你是英语老师
这篇文章100分为总分那你打几分，有什么错误吗？
单说这篇文章过得去吗？

千问 · 2008-8-13 10:59:13

I am form England.
form--from.My mother is a tercher .tercher--teacher要看是针对哪个阶段的学生来评咯因为我是高中的，所以我觉得出去拼写错误之外，句型也太简单勒一点

千问 · 2008-8-13 10:59:13

句型太单调了老师看着会觉得很烦会是低分应该用点别的句型多用长句子可以考虑使用从句

千问 · 2008-8-13 10:59:13

I am a girl from England. I am in 5 grade. My elder sister and I is twins, My mother is a teacher.we are a happy family.