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显示全部楼层 · 2008-8-15 12:07:21

题目要求以“Is Recycling Textbooks a Good Suggestion”为题写篇表赞同的稿件投给学校月报。
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At present,our school newspaper is discussing"Is Recycling Textbooks a Good Suggestion”with us. I argee with this suggestion.Why?
One reason that large number of students in our country,each year were use grate deal of paper which is made for trees. Recycling Textbooks can prevent tree's cuting .
In addtion to this problem that paper-fomation has lots of bedaub.Use less paper can make our world more the green.Due to new books were took much money,It was stress that for the poor.Then,Australian has succssful way that to Recycling Textbooks.
My opinion is try to do it,then find out result, according to the result choose whether recycling textbooks.

千问 · 2008-8-15 12:07:21

1.the newspaper of our school2.One reason is that(接表语从句) 3.each year a greate deal of paper,which is made of trees，were used.后面最后再接一句more paper used means more trees cut.类似的句子和后面的衔接。（used cut 都是过去分词做定语） 4. can prevent trees from cuting。这样比较符合习惯表达。5.bedaub指涂抹; 过分地装饰; 弄脏。这里的意思应该是指污染吧，用pollution就可以了6.Useing less paper 动...

千问 · 2008-8-15 12:07:21

At present, the topic of our shcool's newspaper is 'Is Recycling Textbooks a Good Suggestion'.I agreed. Why? The main reason is that many students use plently of papers each year, ...

千问 · 2008-8-15 12:07:21

第三行 one reason that---one reason is \that去掉 large number --a large number were use--were去掉 Great deal of--a great deal of 第四行 made for--made from 第五行 use less paper--usin...