Dear XXX,
I've already taken the TOEFL yesterday. The result will be announced in 15 days, and it will be sent to you.
However, I think the score will be higher if I have enough time to prepare, also, it is my first time to take the TOEFL test.
Thank you for waiting for it. I am really grateful that you can give me the chance. : )
By the way, could you please tell me how soon I will be able to hear back from the school? I am really looking forward to being accepted by your school.
Best regards,
XXX
这样可以吗?会不会有哪里显得有点不礼貌呢?另外第一句的I've already taken the TOEFL yesterday要不要改成I took it呢?
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