我稍微给你改动了改动，因为说实话，你的中文也不怎么通。。。而且太流水账了。。。小学的作文吧。如果想高级一点儿，可以用where或者which连接一下。We went to beautiful Shandong for last holiday. There were rivers and mountains everywhere. And I went to zoo with my family.We saw a lot of cute animals.It was a happy trip. I really like there and hope to go there again if i have chance....
my perfect holidayi went to shandong by car in last holiday,Shandong is very beautiful,rivers and mountains everywhere.i went to the zoo with my family,there are many animals,the...
The perfect holiday The last vacation I go by car the shandong, there is very beautiful. There are a lot of mountain, water. I and family together go to the zoo, there's a lot ...
Last holiday i went to ShanDong by bus.There is very beautiful.There are a lot of montains and rivers. I andmy family went to the zoo together. There are a lot of animals ,they...
