改正语法错误。

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The weather be so hot, how can I do. Greenhouse effect the earth continues to heat up, this let us note the importance of low-carbon. Here are my suggestions: We should turn off the light, turning off the water, less use of disposable plastic bags, when you apply shopping bags, do not burn trash or litter anywhere, as far as possible take a walk instead of bus, and call upon you people around to do so. You know, protect the global environment is everyone's responsibility, it is our home, act now!

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千问 | 2011-6-15 15:46:45 | 显示全部楼层
第一句how改为what,因为是按照句子意思是我能做什么。第三行less前面加上making,make (less)
useof是固定搭配 (少)使用的意思。第四行take改为taking因为是非谓语动词又不充当分句的独立成分
call改为calling第五行protect改为protecting,动名词短语做主语成分
act改为action...
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