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查看11 | 回复2 | 2008-9-15 12:26:37 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Tody I have go to outdoors with my friend, we all don't have dog so we can't walk the dog ,we are face to face taik about my new school and we're very happy .But we have got to go home ,because dear(晚饭) time is comeing ,I should finish doing my homework in order to going with my friend ,so go!
(Have got to ,in order to ,outdoors,face to face,waik the dog, finish doing sht,这六个字一定要有,请不要替换,或删除,谢谢)

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千问 | 2008-9-15 12:26:37 | 显示全部楼层
Tody I have got to outside with my friend, we all don't keep dogs so we couldn't walk the dog.we were talking about my new schoolface to face and we were very happy .Then we had to go back home ,because it was diner(晚饭) time,I should finish doing my homework in order to play with my friend ,so go!...
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千问 | 2008-9-15 12:26:37 | 显示全部楼层
Today I stayed outdoors with my friend. Neither of us had a dog so we could not walk the dog. We talked face to face about my new school and we were very happy. But later we had go...
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