英语短文改错

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Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brothers nor sisters—in any other words,I am only child.My parents love my dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.they did not want me to do any work at family:they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject.We may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they really understand their daughter?What things are in other homes,I wonder.

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千问 | 2008-10-13 11:23:30 | 显示全部楼层
1. in any other words,改为in other words.这是固定词组2。I am only Child.改为 I am the only child of my parents.这样更确切。3。 love my dearly , 改为love me dearly4. do all they can make sure,改为:do all they can to make sure...5. I get a good education,这里a似乎应该去掉。6。they did not want me to do any work at family,根据上下文应改为They don't want me........
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千问 | 2008-10-13 11:23:30 | 显示全部楼层
Most of my classmates with the same, I do not have brothers and sisters - that is to say I am an only son. Parents do everything for me, I guarantee that the best education. They w...
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千问 | 2008-10-13 11:23:30 | 显示全部楼层
1. √ 2. in any other words→in other words 3. they can make→they can to make 4. I get→I can get5. they did not→they do not6. my subject→my subjects 7. a same→the same ...
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千问 | 2008-10-13 11:23:30 | 显示全部楼层
in any other words---in other wordslove my dearly---love me do any work at family---at homeget much time to talk about together---to talk together a visitor and a guest---a...
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