请帮忙改改英语作文，谢谢

显示全部楼层 · 2008-9-21 15:41:59

If I were a bird
If I were a bird,I would fly in the sky freely.
If I were a bird,I wouldn't be worried about my study,and I wouldn't take the examination, too.
I think bird is a symbol of freedom,it can fly toeverywhere. if I were a bird,I would fly to the place which I want to fly to.
In fact,I wish I were a dove because dove is often used as a sign of peace. And if I were a dove.Because dove often useds as a sign of peace.. And if I were a dove,I would fly all over the world with peace.
Anyway,I still live in this world. I am not a bird. Nothing could be changed

千问 · 2008-9-21 15:41:59

examination，加s比较好吧I think bird is a symbol of freedom，用a bird 或者birds,不加冠词的单数普通名词不能指代一类事物it can fly to everywhere，严格地说，这话前要有连接词（and就行），否则两个独立的句子之间不能用“，”，不过可以用“；”the place which I want to fly to. 改成the place to which I want to fly或the place where I want to fly ,定语从句的知识，楼主要问为什么的话再说好不？很长的啊this world，用the world 就行啊，难道还有th...

千问 · 2008-9-21 15:41:59

If I were a birdIf I were a bird,I could fly in the blue sky.If I were a bird,I would fled away from the world.If I were a bird,I might be free from dazing exams.Bird s...

千问 · 2008-9-21 15:41:59

一大堆，这是中学的吗？我才小学 - -

千问 · 2008-9-21 15:41:59

力不从心啊...