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Absolutely, more knowledge about physical harms to which aids brings have been informed to more people.
又加一句The symptoms about the carriers are divers. The most seriousresult of the one who have been infected by HIV is will die for the disease 恩啊...全部回答后加20分 麻烦各位了

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千问 | 2008-10-18 18:50:09 | 显示全部楼层
which前面不要to harm也是不可数名词,不用变复数 have变为has,因为主语是more knowledge,不可数。 Absolutely可以换成别的词,Recently之类表时间的,或者In fact之类的。 第二句: divers改为different who后面have改为has The most serious result of the one who have been infected by HIV is will die for the disease 这句子结构有问题,可以改为:The most serious result of the one who has been infec...
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千问 | 2008-10-18 18:50:09 | 显示全部楼层
Absolutely, more knowledge about physical harms which AIDS brings has been informed to more people....
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