你这个是真的要做的吗？如果你有钱的话。。。你可以出钱，但是你别自己去做，看起来你从来没有这方面活动的经验啊。。。我的感觉是这个proposal tells me nothingI want to set up a non-governmental, non-profit charity fund (Internet charity platform), in order to provide help to those in need.CInformation of those who are in need of help(recipients) will be from the Ministry of Civil Affairs (cooperation from the ministry needed)DMethods of donation will be learned from Oxfam Hong Kong(including all kinds of charity activities)Ebased on realityGthe fund will be set up in ChinaI'm hoping to obtain your helpAstartup fund for this charityBexperienced charity workers to help us (We can listen to them in terms of the working model of the fund)Ctechnical supportWhy I do charity I like it (I wish to put all my heart and strength into charity work)Why I need your help Sense of achievement and happinessHope you could reply我是按照你的原文翻译的，但如果你要写给别人的话，请你千万不要这么做。。。因为，正如我开头所说的，你的整个proposal里面，在有经验的人眼里，没有包含任何有意义的内容
I want to set up a non-government, not-for-profit Charitable Fund(Internet Charity Platform), to provide helps to needed people/Group.C, The list of needed people (Donee/beneficiary)is from Chinese Civil Affairs Dept(CCAD). (The Fund will corporate with CCAD)D, Learn form Oxfam International HK to raising fund (Including all kinds of Fund-raising events)E. (Based on facts)F. The Fund is set up in ChinaI hope you can help us on:A The Star-up costs of the organizationB. Please send experienced members to help/train us (We will also learn from them on the model of the charity )C. Technical Support.Why I want to work for Charity?I love it (I want/willing to devote all my life on Charitable work)Why you want to help me :You will feel Huge accomplishment and well-being after the achievement.Hope to talk to you soon.
I want to set up a non-governmental, non-profit charity fund (Internet charity platform)to provide help to those need HELP. Information of those who are in need of help(recipients) will COME from the Ministery of Civil Affairs (cooperation from the ministry needed)DMethods of donation will be learned from Oxfam Hong Kong(including all kinds of charity activities)EBased on reality!Gthe fund will be set up within China Hoping to obtain your helpAstartup fund for this charityBExperienced charity workers to help us (We can listen to them in terms of the working model of the fund)CTechnical supportWhy I do charity I like it (I wish to put all my heart and strength into charity work)Why I need your help Sense of achievement and happinessHope you could reply
